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Idea: a Star Trek VI edit - Klingon blood from pink to red?

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Has anyone ever attempted to recolor the pink Klingon blood to be red? I think this would be a great edit. I would love to have that inaccuracy fixed. The blood was only ever made pink in the first place because of scene at the beginning was too violent and making it pink toned it down a bit.

Would this be a hard edit to do? Anybody interested in doing this? I do not have the time nor the skill myself, but it is an edit I would really love to see made someday if anybody is up to it.

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I hate that damned Milk of Magnesia. Klingons had red blood before and since.

It'd be neat if AfterEffects chromakey could handle the job. But I suspect it'd be as braindead as any other color selection tools I've seen. (Why can't they be vector-based, and less dependent on brightness?, he asked, rhetorically).

But maybe that histogram trick could be used - with a hand-corrected sample as a base... hmmm... but that'd get tedious with changing shots.


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I never thought about it before, and now that you say it, it's always going to annoy me.

I look forward to someone doing this.

Dr. M

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No that was hilarious.
You might as well cut the Klingon saying that you need to hear Shakespeare in its original Klingonese.

Dr. M

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Yeah, those are good parts. Anyway, it doesn't matter as this is not a real project. I hope somebody does it someday though.

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I'm actually planning something like this at the moment guys. Let me just say that I don't think ST6 is a movie that 'needs' editing. I enjoy it just the way it is, I'm just curious how things would go with a few alterations here and there.

I've been thinking about the pink blood issue as one thing to tackle. However a few other minor things would need to be tweaked to acommodate this. In any case I don't understand how changing the blood [to pink] allows for a lesser rating. Go back and watch that part, It's still pretty fucking violent. The gore is cartoon-y but the impact is the same in my eyes.

I am also considering adding in some footage from the star trek: Voyager episode - Flashback. [or was it flashbacks?] = really just the excelsior evading the Klingons. I'm only planning to add this if if works well without disrupting the existing storyline, Other wise ?I'll drop it. I am aware that the episode in question has a few plot inconsistencies with the plot of st6.

The Shakespeare stuff has to stay imo, although i'm a little ambivalent on the Nixon bit. I think it would work much better if only spock says "..an old human proverb..."

Going over my notes those are really the only things I've considered so far, apart from minor things like correcting typos and what not.

I haven't seen the Voyager episode in years so i'm going to go rewatch that and see if there's anything i can do with it.

Anyone else interested in working along side me in this, or even tackling their own version?
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Red blood is automatically recognised as gory, by the brain. If you have to think about it as blood, it reduces the impact slightly.

And combined with Klingons who had been changed into even-more alien form, the ratings-dolts would consider it close to monster-killing - something they've always accepted. Also, ratings-boards give outer-space science fiction uncommonly harsh ratings. For one thing, some time back, influential theologians twisted religious text - humans must the the only intellegent life. That, and the tolerance, and imaginativness, and several other things about SciFi, offend ratings-morons. But ST VI was a very mainstream movie, and it was seen as slightly-campy, self-depricating nostalgia, so they eased up on it.

It all sounds goofy, but ratings boards are run by goofy folks.

Afterthought: It also had the overtly-obvious political message about the end of the Cold War, and our very reality-based worry that Gorbachev was assasinated at one point. We came out on the happy side of the Cold War, so it brought up pleasant thoughts. That's something that made Western rate-ers very happy, they couldn't help but like it.

So ST VI got the kind of violence rating that non-SciFi, or monster-kill movies get.

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I will be looking forward to your release, Johnny Ringo. I wish I could pitch in, but I doubt it. I'm full of advice though.


For the love of all things SciFi, please get rid of "Don't wait for the translator!". (And get rid of the translator guy). That's their most idiotic cold-war reference. Klingons have universal translators, just like everyone else.


Dried human blood is brown. Assuming that Klingon blood is, then that makes it far more believable that no-one noticed the dried blood on the transporter pad, until Checkov looked closely. Maybe you could make dried Klingon blood an unexpected dark color.


If you're going with the aspect ratio on the ST VI special edition, then you're going to have a problem matching Flashback footage to it. The first several years of new-Trek episodes have poor-quality video. Cropping & resizing will make it worse. They were mastered onto D2 - a low-end (lowest?) broadcast-quality tape, until the final two season's of Voyager. In fact, they are somewhat pillarboxed - black bars on the side. Also there's artifacting & other video problems that'll get worse with resizing.

ST-VI was Super35, and they opened the matte to close to 16:9, for the DVDs. If you trim them to 16:9, then you'll have less resizing to do with Flashback. (Phase-II-style edits would look ok in fullscreen, the opened matte means most of the camera work looks normal in P&S).


The biggest problem with Flashback is that Janeway is right there. She's obvious in almost every shot. (Makes Mulgrew look like a camera-hog, but the story is really about her being in Tuvok's past). Fortunatally, the scenes are replayed from a variety of camera angles. So it might be possible to find enough bits where it's possible to composite her out. When she's in normal uniform, you might be able to replace her head (far fetched), alter her hair, or use shots where she'd far enough to try to not-notice.

The nastiest bit is where Kang is on the viewscreen, and she walks right up and blocks the right side of viewscreen. I think that one can be repaired by compositing. But when it switches back to a view of the nebula, there's going to be a challenge. Thankfully, Takei's acting is passable in the sequence with Kang.


My Phase-II-style vapor-edit would only use a few of the Flashback scenes, and change the episode's story a bit. Sulu wouldn't disable the Klingons and head right back. Klingons have subspace communications, too. Sulu would cooperate until he was out of sensor range. Then he'd sneak back in. He'd save the nebula explosion trick, in case the Klingons caught him again (which they did).

Also, I'd, personally, remove all references to Dimitri dying. He was alive at the end of the original. (Or you could choose to composite him out of the viewscreen shot at the end). I consider his death to be another false memory - not as traumatic one as the virus's signature false-memory, but pretty bad. (Especially for a Vulcan who wasn't very cooperative with the emotion-repression as a child).


And then there's the small matter of Rand's rank being different in Flashback. That would require some very advanced compositing, maybe rendering, or you would have to choose her closer-shot scenes exclusively from one or the other.

The first event in Flashback, where Rand teases Tuvok about the tea, happens before the start of the movie. And Whitney (Rand) is suddenly a bad actress. (I blame it on the same Voyager directing that made Takei's performance Chacotay-wooden. Captain Sulu was awesome in ST VI, and suddenly awful for much of Flashback). Too bad, because there's actually a shot or two without Janeway.


Heh, no matter how many opinions any two Trek fans have in common, you will always find some thing(s) that they completely disagree about.

I'm sure it puts me in the minority, but almost all of the ST VI jokes make me wince. I remember the theater audience laughing where I was cringing. The ones that I hate require them to be out of character, in my opinion.

While the sabatoge discussion has humorous moments, it requires everyone but Valeris to be uncommonly dense. Then there's the jokes that make Checkov a comic-relief character. Checkov's character had lame dialog in ST II, then he became more & more of a dufus. He bounced back to normal in Generations. (In TOS, he had the "Russian invention" thing, but it eventually became clear that he was joking with them). And my gawd, the translation scene. Ick.

The only thing that earns unreserved laughter, from me, is the whole "I'm going to kill you anyway, so I might as well tell you." sequence. And I know few people who share that opinion. If my version ever gets realized, it will be fairly humorless.


One more thing: Normally, a PAL DVD would give you more vertical resolution (if it were scanned, to PAL, from film). But they did an pitiful job of resizing the NTSC sources to PAL. Modern software would do a lot better. So if you can get ahold of the NTSC version...


Another more thing: That bit with Uhura struggling with books to do the translating. Yeesh. Even if they could pick up on the universal translator's generated voice (I doubt it, that's more believeable for computerized voice impersonation), I don't think their equipment would pick up on normal Klingon sentances. She should be reading from a monitor. Unfortunatally, I think the scene would have to be cut. Or have the two bored Klingons challenge them for ID, then switch away to the Excelsior, or switch to Kirk & McCoy. The audience can just worry about it until we see the Enterprise crew again. Might also be able to crop the books out and have Uhura start to say "We are the..." and then switch.

Edit, again: Vertical resolution, not horizontal.

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Well I like what you've posted so far so I'm happy to hear what ever you have to say.

If memory serves re: flasback, I should be able to get what I want content wise - and that is Sulu - as long as i get his voice, in discussion with Kang and any shots of the excelsior in flight. As far as ratio and cropping goes I'm only planning to slot footage in if i can make it work. Re: Janeway - Yeah I agree with you and it is an ep of voyager after all. And if I show Tuvok at all it will crtainly be in a trimmed down fashion.

All i'm really after from flashback is a few odds and ends to tie sulu + excelsior crew into the story with the rescue attempt. I'm definitely not going to show Dimitri dying since a) I like the character and b) that would of course mean he's a zombie at the end of star trek 6. In any case there's not a whole lot else from the episode that I can or want to use, I'm definietely not trying to integrate the story of 'flashback' or anything that comes accross that way.

That said I wonder if anyone's bothered to try edit Vulcan ears onto Tim Russ' human character seen on the Enterprise B in Generations...Would have made for a nice Tie in since he [Tuvok] obviously served aboard the excelsior prior to that date.

Your idea about the dried Klingon blood that chekov examines is quite a good one since it is the bright pink / purple shade of the fresh blood seen. and I like the fact that it would be harder to notice. I was already considering what to do about the pink smudges on the walls of the Kronos one.

I think part of the magic of star trek 6 is that its a fun movie with action and mystery elements.

what do you guys think about adding the names of other deceased cast /crew to the begining dedication, along with Gene Roddenberry. Would this be 'out of line' for anyone?
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I've dreamed about converting Russ's character to Tuvok, in Generations! Maybe a person could use something like Poser to render eartips. It'd take a lot of fiddling to line the head movement up, but it'd be worth it. Once there's a convincing source of eartips, properly lit, it shouldn't be that much work to composite them in. Be worth a shot.


Yeah... expanding the dedication is an interesting idea. I wouldn't want to dilute the tribute to GR. But hey, its an edit, not the original, I think it could be cool.


I probably came off as an ST VI basher. I love the film, its just a few little things that set my teeth on edge. I have nitpicks for all the movies.


I don't have very extensive notes. I was planning to fit it to 2 episodes. So I was going to add Flashback Excelsior bits, take care of the nitpicks, and find ways to trim for time, once I got into it. But summitted for your consideration:


Might try to put in the alternate shot of Kirk non-verbally retracting his "Let them die!", if and see how it plays, since it was Shatner's wish.


I'd clip out the use of that klunky Bosun's Whistle, there (& in ST II, for that matter). There was only one occurance in TOS - and they used a real whistle - appropriate for something traditional. They didn't use it for Ambassador Sarek, other alien digitaries, or for Starfleet admirals.

A for-home-video bit I'd leave out: "Klingons have no tear ducts." It is funny, and I hate to lose "I bet that Klingon bitch never shed a tear.", but Spock wouldn't make that error. Tear ducts drain the tears. Tears are produced by lacrimal glands. Besides, there's Worf's story that has a line about "cried a river of tears..." (quote approximate).


West's rescue plan is an interesting for-home-video addition, but I like the pacing of the theatrical.

Also for-home-video, pulling the mask off of West is a little hokey, and also weirds out the pacing, but it is nice to show the audience that a human was putting himself at risk, and violently involved. Of course he'd planned to pull off the mask, for his escape, so it makes sense.

Might weigh those against seeing almost-Odo, close-up, as an admiral... it's kinda distracting, to me.


And the SE addition of flashbacks during the mind meld. It helps us remember the who the hell they're talking about. But it just seems melodramatic, and it distracts from a very intense scene. (Maybe tone it down, get rid of that hokey sound effect, shorten them up).

1/4 impulse is a power-setting, not a speed. I could accept the claim that it was more than regulations allow, but Saavik ordered it, and she was concerned about regulations. If I recall, it was used in the other movies as well. Personally, I don't really care for the throat-clearing and tsk-tsk'ing anyway. The speeded-up footage for leaving spacedock looks false. I think it was sped up from recycled footage, so ya night steal it from whichever movie. Yes, Kirk likes his orders followed, and maybe he chafes at some rules, but he doesn't go out of his way to piss off Starfleet, while he's there, just for the hell of it.

That whole notion of mothballing Starfleet, or its military capability, is too silly for anyone to utter. There's nothing hypothetical about an alien threat, there's the Romulans, at the very least.


I wish it were practical to get rid of those distracting neon clocks, and replace the curved tube-tv-screens with flatscreen. But that'd be an overwhelming amount of work.

I doubt Klingons would choose the word "Gulag". Might be possible to edit out the uses of the word, and just leave "Rura Pente". Morphed frames could be used to keep them from being jump-cuts. Yeah, it could be chalked it up to the universal translator, and left it as is. But it seemed like a heavy-handed "They're Soviets! See? They're Soviets!" to me. They were clearly politically-analogous to the Soviets in TOS, without any blunt cues for the non-fan general audience. I think it would at least be nice for "Welcome to [] Rura Pente!" because the original line is clumsy. And if it were the universal translator, would that word have survived into their century? Maybe, it might've been applied to other powers's labor-camps, over the centuries.


Oh, and: "If the shoe fits." I'd cut Checkov gloating, and Spock getting his attention. He drops the shoes, we see Valeris's, Spock's, and the crowd's reaction after having their attention drawn to Dax's feet. Camera pans down and we see the problem. Checkov & Valeris look dissapointed. Actually, it's hard to believe that no one noticed his feet sooner. Maybe have him come in, then the camera pans to his feet. Gets right to the punchline.

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I'd always found the judge at the show trial to be rather un klingon in his speech and mannerisms. Klingons often speak in a very abrupt and cincise manner. Maybe I could overdub him with Klingon dialogue from some other source. Although that could seem out of place since they made it quite clear that everyone is speaking in english as a result of the translator.

Here's a little something I was tooling around with earlier...Nothing final, just playing with some ideas.
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5453/frame1tucky8.png

Hey Jaiman, Did you notice this? - Early on as the Excelsior encounters the shockwave Dimitri is standing next to Sulu, then he appears in one of the alcoves, then he is back next to Sulu and and runs over to one of the alcoves...you probably wont notice a thing like that unless you look out for it. at about the 4 minute mark.


Might try to put in the alternate shot of Kirk non-verbally retracting his "Let them die!", if and see how it plays, since it was Shatner's wish.

which part exactly were you referring to?

I agree about the mind meld scene.

There was something else but I can't remember right now...
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Sorry to take so long. I don't get much written on Sundays & Mondays - too much distracting tv.

Originally posted by: Johnny Ringo
I'd always found the judge at the show trial to be rather un klingon in his speech and mannerisms. Klingons often speak in a very abrupt and cincise manner. Maybe I could overdub him with Klingon dialogue from some other source. Although that could seem out of place since they made it quite clear that everyone is speaking in english as a result of the translator.
Yeah, the judge never seemed quite Klingon-like, to me, either.

But he was elderly, and I seem to remember some old Klingons that didn't act or talk like the younger ones. And, now that I think about it, he wasn't a politician, military, or agent. I think we've had a scientist or two who didn't talk typically. And perhaps those guys who created the new Kahless. Maybe that's how an aged Klingon judge might sound.

Also, they may've had judges specializing in recorded trials of other species. He could have been trained to sound, more like an Earth-er. Just as (in TOS) Arne Darvin was trained to sound like a toady human, and Kras (the mining-rights negotiator in TOS Friday's Child) may've been trained to sound less Klingon-like.

I'd think I'd leave it. Like you say, it wouldn't be right to hear him speaking Klingonee, with subtitles, at the same time Chang & the defender are translated for us. I don't think you'd find enough Klingonee from one voice, anyway. (And there are supposedly people who actually speak Klingonee, LOL). There's an outside chance of getting someone who can voice-act, but I've never seen a younger person who could do a convincing elderly guy.


Now that you've brought it up, I realize that there's always been two main styles of speech in Klingons.

There was the blunt, terse, authoritative, and often loud style (Kang, one of Kor's soldiers, the Klingon captain in "Elaan of Troyius", Kruge and a couple of his men (ST III), most of them in V, and the majority from TNG onward).

Then there was the smoother speech pattern, usually overlaid with an air of intimidation, insincere-politeness, scheming and so forth (Kor, Koloth, the Klingon in TOS "A Private Little War", Kruge's mistress (ST III), Maltz (ST III), Koord (ST V), the major Klingons in ST VI, Lursa and B'Etor, Gowron, Martok...).


Here's a little something I was tooling around with earlier...Nothing final, just playing with some ideas.
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I like that! That dark reddish color is pleasing. And I like that there's a lot of midrage, instead of being "punchy", saturated and contrast-y. It's more subtle, but it's legible - a good balance.


Hey Jaiman, Did you notice this? - Early on as the Excelsior encounters the shockwave Dimitri is standing next to Sulu, then he appears in one of the alcoves, then he is back next to Sulu and and runs over to one of the alcoves...you probably wont notice a thing like that unless you look out for it. at about the 4 minute mark.

LOL! There he is. I saved IMDB's goofs list, but I hadn't checked it out before. Looks like it'd be a pain to composite him out of the seat, because there isn't a clean shot of the console. Someday I'm going to go through their list and check all those bits for repairability.

I think there was always something 'wtf' about that scene...

I think that even the quicker, subtler gaffes are worth fixing. It's like you notice them subliminally. Or you know that something doesn't jibe, even if you don't spot it. In the olden days, long before videotape, I made audio tapes of TOS episodes, to listen to between syndicated runs. There'd be a great scene that I loved on tape. But when I watched it on tv, there'd be spot where I'd feel a disconnect for a moment. Something seemed off, but I couldn't put my finger on it. Decades later, I was looking at a gaffes list, and noticed they happened during those scenes.

By the way, the scene where Kirk tackles the president just ain't right. All of a sudden, the assassin is aiming at the edge of the president's torso? That's lucky for ol' Prez, he shifts position just enough for it to miss, before Kirk can reach him. I'd rather have it cut from pulling-the-trigger to the white frame & the pillar exploding. Perhaps run a slow-motion program on the trigger-pull, so the music and sound would sync up.


Oh, and if you keep the West as the would-be assassin, you have to ditch "This isn't Klingon blood.". That one admiral had reached for the neck (pulse, I suppose), so he could've felt something wrong while the camera was elsewhere.



Might try to put in the alternate shot of Kirk non-verbally retracting his "Let them die!", if and see how it plays, since it was Shatner's wish.

which part exactly were you referring to?


After the Starfleet briefing, Spock and Kirk argue about the negotiation order. Spock says "They are dying." and Kirk says "Let them die.". It's about 11:36 on the SE.

There's an alternate take, of Kirk, on the extras disc, in the "Prejudice" section, at about 1:18. He says "Let them die.", but is immediatly embarassed. Of course it's letterboxed, and probably needs color grading, and there's a little dirt.

It'd be an interesting experiment to keep the original "Let them die." (looks and sounds better, to me, than the alternate take), cut to
part of Spock's long reaction, cut back to a selected chunk of Kirk gesturing that he didn't mean that, and then cut back to another piece of Spock's reaction.

I think the end of Spock's reaction looks more shocked & dissaproving, and might work better as his first reaction shot. The beginning of it could possibly fit as a reaction to Kirk's embarassment.

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In short I've decided that I may as well put in enough edits to make it worth my while...

I remembered today the 'Judgement' episode from enterprise but my memory of it is vague, Just wondering if there's anything much of use. the courtroom is different but it may well be possible to use the enterprise judge. I'll have to take another look to check but i quickly looked at some screen grabs online and looked like there were some promising shot.

In regards to Enterprise footage I was considering setting up a little sequence to expand on the destruction of praxis, I've some the idea roughly sorted but on the other hand i do like the simple 'blam' explosion out of owhere of the original intro. I'll see how things go and whether it adds or detracts from the overall feel. Basically I was considering how it's mentioned that Praxis collapsed due to overmining. So basically there would be a slight lead up to the event using footage from a few [enterprise] sources.

I'm hoping to do the title sequence similar to the mage i posted - initially I grey scaled all the credits since there varied in colour. i thought that looked pretty decent but decided to try and liven up the sequence slightly. I'm also debating whether to keep the VI - or simply label it STAR TREK: The Undiscovered Country. Thoughts?

I'm planning to re watch generations to see if there are any suitable 'enterprise b' shots that could stand in for the excelsior. I can't remember whether they actually altered the exterior at all for the newer ship. And also star trek 5 for any good footage I might wanna slot in of the Enterprise A.

One idea I had I'm sort of split on, I'll do abit of a test and see how it works out, During Kirks log, show a silent flashback of David Marcus on the Genesis planet - And mostly likely of him being killed. Don't want it to come off the wrong way so I'll only do it if it fits well.

Planning to redo the torpedo fire - something closer visually to the torpedoes in First contact. [bright white with a blue glow] And if i can i'd like to either enhance or redo the beam in shots.

Minor things like the Dimitri shot should be quite an easy fix. what else...oh yes, Red Klingon Blood well that's off the top of my head and those are the main things anyway. I've got a fair bit of watching and reviewing to do now so I'll be taking a lot of notes. at the moment I'm looking at possibly stealing footage from star treks 3, 5 and 7. 4 different episodes of Enterprise, 1 episode of voyager and 1 or 2 other secret sources.

Re - the spock / kirk scene, I'm with you now, I'll dig thru the bonus disc during the week and see what I can see.

Re - kirk tackles the president - yeah, the assassin [west] fires AND misses before they go down

It's late and I'm tired. lemme regroup at some point and go over my notes in detail.

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^The Enterprise B does have an altered exterior compared to the Excelsior. The secondary hull has "fins" on both sides, and the nacelles have new ramscoop-esque caps on them.
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Nice to hear you might be having a go at this Ringo. I just really think the red blood would make the movie fit much more tightly with ST continuity. If you find a way to make the blood red let us know how you did it and post some screens. I like your idea about using some of the Voyager "Flashback" footage. I think that could be interesting if you can get the quality to match up. Good luck.

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Indeed.

In regards to the red Klingon blood, If it turns out well I'd be up for just providing that too if people aren't interested in my entire edit. I will definitely post progress as I go along. I'm just taking notes and playing with rough footage at this point since its going to be probably 2 months or so until I can secure all the footage sources I'm after. - Legally that is

keep any ideas flowing guys, this thread has been a wealth of information so far.