I've made a few snips. This is really a pilot, it's not final product quality as I really can't pull that off, but I'm doing what I can.
I've left most of ROTS intact so far with only small cuts - I'm right now working on the water-ballet scene - someone else here can probably edit better than I can. I might also stitch these back into a full length movie.
Current noticeable changes:
1. Anakin no longer mentions "vulture droids" (metaphor to earth that doesn't work)
2. Attack droids' cartooney dialogue reduced
3. Several close-up "beat" shots cut
4. References to "democracy" removed, as the Republic is, well, a republic, not a democracy (factual error)
5. Some of the cornier dialogue between Anakin and Padmé has been cut
Also a couple pan shots were cut.