Originally posted by: Doctor M
I think maybe it would be better if you cut the two words "the people" altogether. (Just leave "Don't do it.")
Cutting away from it makes it feel rushed, keeping the video shows the smirk. I don't think you can win with it. Also (and maybe it's just me) his tone in delivering the line is still pretty poor.
I like Reeves delivery here. Keep in mind the context. This takes place after all of the other action in the city. Superman caught the falling spire that almost crushes a mom and her child, Zod starts blowing up cars, which Superman isn't fast enough to stop, he barely stops Zod from blowing up a 18 wheeler, and now they're throwing buses full of people around. He just gave up a life as Lois's love so he could get his powers back to save these people, and he realizes he's unable to. He's desperate and as they're throwing the bus he's yelling "the people" helplessly.
Originally posted by: Doctor M
That 1.5 second shot looks strange...almost makes me think you took a shot from Superman Returns and morphed Reeves' face on it....strange.
I think maybe it would be better if you cut the two words "the people" altogether. (Just leave "Don't do it.")
Cutting away from it makes it feel rushed, keeping the video shows the smirk. I don't think you can win with it. Also (and maybe it's just me) his tone in delivering the line is still pretty poor.
I like Reeves delivery here. Keep in mind the context. This takes place after all of the other action in the city. Superman caught the falling spire that almost crushes a mom and her child, Zod starts blowing up cars, which Superman isn't fast enough to stop, he barely stops Zod from blowing up a 18 wheeler, and now they're throwing buses full of people around. He just gave up a life as Lois's love so he could get his powers back to save these people, and he realizes he's unable to. He's desperate and as they're throwing the bus he's yelling "the people" helplessly.
Originally posted by: Doctor M
That 1.5 second shot looks strange...almost makes me think you took a shot from Superman Returns and morphed Reeves' face on it....strange.
Nope, it's not from Superman Returns.