The only annoying thing about him is that he's likely been a gusher on more than one thread...and if there's one thing worse than anonymous emailers, it's those two-faced little bitches who smile to your face, then stab you in the back.
I hope the fact that you shared his "private email to you" with everyone has him literally angry with rage.
Anyway, lovin' the edits so far...keep up the good work.
Maybe you should try some more radical changes, like 3PO speaks with a german accent, or Luke has tourettes, or when Leia bends over to put the medal on Luke, her left boob could accidentally pop out of her dress. (My personal favourite.
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