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Post #269539

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INv8r_ZIM
Parent topic
Requiem for a Clone War dream... (2003 series) (* unfinished project * - lots of info)
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Date created
3-Feb-2007, 12:31 PM
Great, and I'm looking forward to it. The shorts just never caught my interest as they aired - they just start and end to damn abruptly. One teeny-tiny, utterly nit-picketey suggestion about your crawl though; try "In the aftermath of Geonosis, the duty falls...". The grammar of all of the film crawls are immediate and active, no past-tense, which fits in with the cinematic idea the films follow of in-media res beginings. Keep us abreast of your progress!