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I have now seen the full thing so here is some feedback as requested..........

There is more juddering on some of the BTS scenes. Is this a PAL/NTSC different source issue??

Some of the comic shots are not on screen long enough.

I am no expert but there seem to be bits of the film missing and some scenes shortened. Am I correct there??

Subtitles would be good to explain the differences between the 35mm/70mm Theatrical and Digital Theatrical/DVD/VHS releases. Likewise the censored UK scene which I missed. Was it shown??

Also an explanation of the extra lines in the Digital Theatrical/DVD/VHS release. I think that was missed.

In the Lars Homestead, after Anakin has confessed his slaughter of the Tuskens and slumped to the floor, Padmé states, "To be angry is to be human," and Anakin responds, "I'm a Jedi! I know I'm better than this!"



In all I loved it and have only written the above as feedback cos I know that you are far from happy with the (so far) end result and asked for specifics.

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Okay Russ, I know I'm a pain but with some of the BTS and stills, are there any that you think flat-out don'twork and should be removed? If so can you send me a PM.

The juddering on some of the BTS stuff is probably where I've slowed down very brief clips so we get a better (& longer) look at them.

Again, which of the comic shots are you referring too.

and yes I think subtitles are probably going to be necessary, unless I (or some willing volunteer) do some sort of commentary on top

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I think I'd prefer sub-titles to a commentary any time, unless it was from the cast or crew.
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have you received your copy yet sluggo, or anyone else for that matter?

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hey all,

just wanted to ask if someone has some kind of template for a disclaimer to go at the beginning of this?

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You get that template yet?

I got a disc in the mail from the UK last night (blank verbatim disc in plastic sleeve, no name on the white padded envelope) but i cant get it to read at all in any of my drives.
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Daveytod, I got your disc through. Sorry I haven't had time to watch it yet. i will post when I do.

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that sounds like it sluggo, it's just a mpeg file on a data disc, so your computer should read it

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Well, let me try it again.

I'm actually sneaking home for my lunch break. I'll take a peek soon.

EDIT: Nope, not working either. Maybe I'll try a friends compy over the weekend.
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hi all,

I'm on the scrounge again!!!

My renewed efforts on this project have had an unforeseen side-effect......I'm really, really enjoying myself again!! And am trying to push the envelope in several subtle ways...hence the scrounging. I'm after some 'clean' sound effects. I'm sure I could get them myself if I ripped all the SW movies to my HD and went through them all but hopefully someone here will already have what I need. I'm after:

A lightsaber being activated and de-activated, some saber hum and movement (swishes through the air etc), and some generic beast noises (preferably from Star Wars, but not recognisably from Episode II).....oh, and a Wilhelm!

Cheers all

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Just sent you an email with the Wilhelm scream

Yancy


Give me a few and I can get you those other sounds
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it's been brought to my attention that I have the wrong email address in my sig...correcting now

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Grr... I'll send them again

Yancy

EDIT:

Sent you the classic Wilhelm, a clean saber on, and saber off sound... looking through my library for some good swooshing saber sounds.
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Hey daveytod, did those files come through okay?


Yancy
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Is the Wilhelm you have taken from a film, or is it a raw isolated sound effect? If it's isolated, I'd be really really interested in getting a copy of that file too

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got the files thanks, gonna try n import them now

PM me your email addy n I'll forward it on to you Rev.

EDIT - don't think the WIlhem really works in this context....I need something with a more animal/beast like sound

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okay, the saber sounds work fine, thanks a lot Yancy, still need to swinging ones tho. The scream really didn't work for me but I've got some ideas on that one.

for those few who have watched the wip version, I'm concerned about the Obi-Wan/Dooku scene where Dooku taunts Obi with the truth. I have nothing at all to go in with this scene...is it best to just cut it?

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Daveytod, I forgot to mention this in the review I sent you. I really liked it. It re-affirmed to me what a cool movie Episode II could have been. Granted you are working with possibly the most hated item GL has put out since the Holiday Special, but don't let that scare you off of the project. I think you have a fine bit of editing alchemy going on with this. I can already see me watching this more than the actual DVD of Episode II.
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still on the lookout fopr some more saber sounds if anyone can help

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hey JD, did you watch the workprint yet?

question for Sluggo and Russ, I know Russ picked up on it but how obvious is it in those cases that I've re-edited scenes? For example, I've lost the entire fireplace scene, and tinkered with the Geonosis battle something rotten. I'm asking simply because I'm going through said battle again at the moment (hopefully for the last time!!) and it's become apparent to me that I've pretty much re-edited the whole thing to make it easier to show what I need to show. When I originally did The Sith Revealed I simply pasted the BTS video over the audio track, but whilst TCR is essentially more of the same, the amount of extra work I've done, i.e .looping audio, making use of soundtracks and effects, slowing video, and loads more - is unbelievable. It blows my minds that the very first post in this thread was over a year ago!!

I know I've still got a lot of work to do on this project. I'm 40 minutes from the end of my final (and I mean final) run through of the main video, then I need to go through it again whilst comparing it to my library of stills to see if theres anything I meant to include but missed, then add some final sound fx, then export it, then learn how to add subtitles, then author the DVD - and this in itself will probably be a hell of an undertaking with the things I've got in mind...the only thing I wish I could do is animated DVD menus...ah well, I suppose I can only do so much. I've only got this far by playing it by ear!

Don't really know why I'm blabbering on here or what the point of this post was....but I've spent all afternoon working on this thing and just wanted to have a natter about it!

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daveytod, I'm a bit too headachey right now to write an indepth review of the TCR WIP - but I must say that you've done a great job. It's better than TSR. The stuttering is the only real nagging thing to me. However, there really isn't any way around that (as you said you need to slow down the footage).

I don't know if I'll have enough free time in the next few weeks, but email me at klokwerk*at*gmail[dot]com and tell me your ideas about the DVD and its menus. I'd like to help out with that if possible. Of course I can do a custom cover for you too if you have ideas for that as well.

To contact me outside the forum, for trades and such my email address is my OT.com username @gmail.com

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Is anyone still seeding this torrent? I've been stuck at 23% or something for a week. Or can anyone send or trade it with me in the UK?
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I think it was obvious in some spots where stuff was edited out, but the edits weren't jarring. Mostly, it was a case of noticing that something was missing after the fact.
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Originally posted by: Faustus
Is anyone still seeding this torrent? I've been stuck at 23% or something for a week. Or can anyone send or trade it with me in the UK?


There are no seeders and I've since deleted the torrent itself I'm sorry to say. But don't worry, that was just the work in progress, the final product should be out (fairly) soon

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Episode III The Video Game - The Movie
24: The Missing Day
Star Wars - The Interactive Board Game DVD
Battlefront - Journal of the 501st
The Clones Revealed

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