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Post #267779

Author
ruesnarn
Parent topic
The Matrix Reloaded - T-HOPE Extended Edition (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
25-Jan-2007, 11:54 AM
I do as a matter of fact...it even makes sense in terms of timing...ill give you the script notes, to make it easier for you to visualize...
immediately after neo fights the three agents outside the meeting...he flies off to find the oracle....at this point you cut to:
( Zion Virtual Control. )
Zion Virtual Control Operator: This is Zion control to the Logos. Gate 3 is standing down. Your path is cleared to Bay 2. Welcome home.
( Logos interior. )
Niobe: Thank you, Control. It's good to be home. Ghost: Damn good.
( Logos enters Zion. )
Niobe: Look at that. Almost a full house. Ghost: No Neb. Niobe: If I was Morpheus, I wouldn' be in a hurry to get back here. Ghost: What do you think the commander will do? Niobe: I don't know, but I'm staying as far away from that as I can.
( Somebody knocks on Niobe's door, it's Lock. )
Lock: I need a moment with you. Niobe: I literally just walked in. Lock: Please ?
( Both are sitting down on chairs. )
Lock: I presume that you were present during this latest act of insubordination ? Niobe: I was. Lock: You were in charge of the recall. How could you let this happen ? Niobe: What do you expect me to do, shoot him ? Lock: Yeah, you'd save me the trouble. Niobe: Jason, you can have my testimony at the debriefing. Lock: I don't want your testimony. Niobe: What do you want ? Lock: Your help. Niobe: All right. Lock: Tell me why. Why does he do it? Is it because of us? Niobe: No. It has nothing to do with you or me. Morpheus does what he believes he has to do. Lock: Then I'll do what I have to. Niobe: You can't. Lock: Why? Niobe: Because you need him. Lock: The hell I do! Niobe: Jason, can you honestly tell me what went through your mind when you saw the tape from the Osiris? (Pause.) Excactly. I thought the same thing. Anybody from this city would. Every damn one of them. Except him. Morpheus believes we will win this war. He makes other people believe it, too. And that's why you need him. Lock: What about you? Do you need him ? Niobe: All I need is a hot shower and something to eat that requires teeth. Lock: Thank you for your candour, Captain. Niobe: Any time, Commander. Lock: Can I see you tonight? After the gathering? Niobe: Of course.
( Lock kisses Niobe. )
Lock: Is something wrong? Niobe: No. Nothing. I'm... I'm just tired. I'll see you tonight. Lock: All right.
Cut to:
Link: This is the Nebuchadnezzar on approach, requesting access to Gate 3.

also, I wanted to ask you were going to include the part during the meeting where Neo tells Wurm and Corrupt to warn the others, then it cuts to ETM footage of them running downstairs and saying its the Feds and they scatter, then cuts back to reloaded footage with Neo about to fight the 3 agents...its kind of a tough cut.
thanks