And I'm gonna be quick...
First nigthclub scene: Just amazing! The editing, the Blade Runner clips, the ambiance...wow! I was entranced! And I actually liked the smoke shot you had at the end of the scene...although it would help if you could add the top of a building or something.
I never had a big problem with the voice, but the second take was much better on delivery!
Honestly, the sync problem bugs me the most. It's really close...but it's still not there.
My DVD player gets out of sync sometimes...it'll be off by a spilt second, but I know instantly when it happens. Something just feels off, ya know? So, I don't really have a solution to this, but I felt I should throw that out there.
I hate focusing on the negative...
So I'll end on a positive note: I think this edit is gonna take fan edits to a whole new level!