Interesting edit, though not really to my personal tastes. I love the Donner Cut, and the fact that Lois risks her life right away. Lois always seemed impulsive, and it suits her charecter perfectly. Plus, its the perfect way to start a film, as Donner said in the audio commentary. The only Lester footage I would put in is the flag scene, and possibly the amnesia kiss, though I like the turning the world around more (as long as the return match at the diner is ommitted.) But your edit is good, and shows lots of creative editing. I'm sure it will appeal to many.