Just saw the night club scene, well done. The best tip I could give (and without reading others tips to avoid redundancy) for the voice over is to try to copy Hayden's delivery a little more--that will help with getting you and him in sync. Like you could just have his voice track going in like a headphone and just practice and practice, I mean if you're not already doing that I guess--if you are, then stay the course I suppose.