Originally posted by: ZakDrizzt
PS: What do you think of Screwball's line in Darkness' Lair 'It's Faerie magic' when Oona's secret is revealed? Never worked for me, I mean, Screwball should be quite familiar with Faerie Magic, being a Faerie himself.
Edit: There's also that scream of Lili's when she looks down at the pool after Jack dives off the cliff. Doesn't make sense why she's screaming. She's actually supposed to be seeing the Pool freeze over, but we don't see that. Could you manipulate that scene a bit? I think there's a shot later where you see a half frozen over pool. Maybe bring that shot back to just before Lili's scream?
PS: What do you think of Screwball's line in Darkness' Lair 'It's Faerie magic' when Oona's secret is revealed? Never worked for me, I mean, Screwball should be quite familiar with Faerie Magic, being a Faerie himself.
Edit: There's also that scream of Lili's when she looks down at the pool after Jack dives off the cliff. Doesn't make sense why she's screaming. She's actually supposed to be seeing the Pool freeze over, but we don't see that. Could you manipulate that scene a bit? I think there's a shot later where you see a half frozen over pool. Maybe bring that shot back to just before Lili's scream?
To be honest I'm bit wary of editing out lines of dialogue, from a version endorsed by Ridley.
'It's Faerie magic' - Screwball is a bit dumb, maybe he just figured it out
Lili's scream - The music and sound effects kind of lock the footage in place, I can see what you are saying though.
'Adios, Amigos' - This line is good candidate for editing out, though is part of the fun nature of Blunder's character. It seems like it was added at a later stage. I could replace this with an extended scream.
'Me and you all is Barbeque' - I don't mind this line
Maybe we should have a vote on what stays or goes
