A couple of nitpicks:
It may be possible to edit the sidebreaks together without overlapping the commentaries, but perhaps not with the program you were using.
On the "Fezzik, Vizzini, and Buttercup" clip, the on-set audio drops out at the end and can only be heard on Track 2 after the commentary finishes
On the last Credits page, the word "materials" is misspelled
Why reduce the size of the images in the galleries? On the LD the pics of the tapestry were full screen.
-Like I say, nitpicks. Keep it up!