I think maybe I need to see the whole thing in context to fully appreciate it. That said the sound does seem kinda I guess the word is artificial or dubbed. The voice work is much better here. I'm getting used to the new voice now; of course my only complaint would be similar to adywan's in that the voice and music could use some balancing with all the other sounds so its on the same level as Obi-wan's voice and sounds like it's more naturally part of the scene than dubbed in.
Here's some stuff I loved to death though: You edited out or darkened the whole gratuitous cameo shot of lucas' daughter and that jar jar actor. THANK YOU. That always seemed too obviously out of place as just the director indulging himself. You found some way, I don't know how, but you found some way to change the dialogue so obi-wan responds to just "I think he is a she" setting up and executing the perfect opportunity for humor that Lucas incredibly fumbled by adding that changeling nonsense. THANK YOU. I can't wait to finally see the finished film!
edit: I was just thinking... maybe you should just axe all the dialogue between anakin and obiwan as they saunter into the club like gansters. I remember watching an old movie that had characters enter in a similar style and they were also talking, but you couldn't hear what they were saying amongst all the surrounding crowd voices until we moved into close-up and they became more audible... just a thought...
