Well I've finally finished the download and watched the edit. Not bad, still very Mostow but it's better and I love what you did with the opening. Excellent stuff except I couldn't really hear the voice over well.

If you ever plan to go back and do more stuff to it, I was thinking you could use the opening of bicentennial man along with the stan winston teaser trailer for T2. I always thought they were very similar since they're both about robots on an assembly line. It goes along very well with what john says later about the terminators coming off an assembly line.