Some suggestions for scene modifications.....if you havent already considered them....
Id be tempted just to remove this shot altogether it just looks fake and pulls you out of the Star Wars universe!
Please Please Please remove this flying thing in the background, ever since it was put into the film in 04 it has distracted me from whats actually going on in the scene, its not necessary and I would pay to have it taken out of the film!!
How are you planning on handling this "comedy" scene??
Darthbeej