Sorry if I sounded critical... as I said, I actually kinda like your version better for the most part (if nothing else, it's interesting to see how the workprint was different). I was just making some observations about things that I noticed - I'm not expecting someone to fix them. I'd do it myself if I knew how to, actually (and so... are there any programs I could use?)

Something I noticed... how come in this video, the bricks on the tower with the three balls are an earthy colour instead of orange (as in the Recobbled Cut and the released versions), and the pencil footage is easier to make out (in the Google video the background is red and it flickers)?