I like No. 13 as well. It's true that the "S" does look kind of funny on top, though. But the word "Shroud" looks a lot better when it isn't compressed so much vertically. Too bad there isn't a way to take the letter "S" from logo #12 and take all of the other features from logo #13. And I'd definitely not go any thinner than that on the top bar. If anything, a little thicker might be good. Maybe a thickness in between logo #12 (based on my original logo) which is too thick, and logo #13, which might be a bit too thin. I know there's got to be a way to do this!

But I'm getting really picky now- I don't blame you if you just want to stop here. But thank you so much for caring so much about the logo- I really, really appreciate it as I am not a graphics person.

I just don't like #11 because "Shroud" is a more important word in the title than "of the". They probably shouldn't be the same size.

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I'm pretty busy right now, but I'll see about posting some more clips with "New Anakin" speaking. Sorry, Hayden

Actually, this whole project is kind of funny considering the 2004 DVD's, in which Lucas completely deleted actors from the OT (Jason Wingreen, Clive Revill, etc.) I'm just taking the next step and replacing PT actors....

By the way, there are a couple major plot points in this edit that I think I've forgotten to mention:

-Boba is the natural son of Marcus Fett- not a clone
-The Republic already had an army, but the Separatist movement is so big that they need a new, better army (established through new dialogue).
-Obi-Wan is preventing Anakin from seeing his mother. This is the main reason for Anakin’s anger and odd behavior throughout the film.
-Obi-Wan is also overly restrictive. It is in fact Obi-Wan’s idea for Anakin to take a vow of celibacy- it isn’t standard Jedi practice (there are married Jedi).
-Anakin is not particularly interested in Padme at the start of the movie. None of the “emotional connection ever since he was nine years old” garbage.
-There no references to “The Prophesy” or midichlorians in this film
-The person that ordered the clones is identifiable by the audience by the film's end
-Anakin is a likable character