Post #256705

Author: THX
Parent topic: Help Wanted: with my Episode II Edit's Opening Crawl....
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Date created: 14-Nov-2006, 11:11 AM

I like the first two paragraphs. The third is a little weak - it should sound more imperative. How about:

Leading the opposition to war, Senator
Amidala is returning to Coruscant to seek
help from the Jedi Knights, who may be
the last hope for peace in the galaxy....