Thanks for the compliments-- I really hope someone who knows photoshop will do a better version of all this stuff someday.

The artwork came from the "Art of Star Wars: Attack of the Clones" and I don't think it's McQuarry. I don't know who it is, but I like it.

Here's a version that incorporates the kind suggestions made here.

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2747/sotdteaser2brj1.jpg

Edit to add: sorry, no hi-res version available. This was created as posted. I hope this fast-and-dirty draft can be a guide to someone who knows how to create a hi-res version (cause I don't). :-(