Post #254338

Author: Commander Courage
Parent topic: Another bloody edit of TPM (* unfinished project *)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/254338/action/topic#254338
Date created: 1-Nov-2006, 2:35 PM

I really like that crawl, Erik. The last paragraph could use some work but on the whole, a great job. The opening sentence is worthy of "Star Wars."

On "this being Starkiller Ep1": I wouldn't like to commit to that at this stage. We've barely met! I'm not ready yet... I haven't even finished the training!

I understand; that's just something to think about. It's a big responsibility after all.