"On the "Noooo!", I actually thought it worked a bit better with the narration and new music, it came off less silly and a little more dramatic. The No! makes sense if he tells you why he's yelling it. "
Good point. It definitely works a lot better with narration- maybe it's just the memories from the original cut
The neat thing about this scene is that it comes off as almost one of the Tone Poems- starting and ending with "This is what it feels like to be Anakin Skywalker."