I think it would be very dramatic if the fight between Obi-Wan and Anakin was there, with lots of narration over it, showing exactly what was going on in his head as he fought with Obi-Wan. During this fight, we would have numerous flashbacks, some to times with Padme, some of times with the emporer, and some with Obi-Wan, showing thier friendship. As we look at Anakin burning on the ground at the end of the fight, and him screaming in agony, we hear more narration from Anakin, and this leads in to one more, final flashback that defines the whole movie and his overall motive, making us ultimately sympathyze with him. Then we would see Obi-Wan, standing there as he delivers his last lines, and walks off. Anakin sits there burning, in agony, and delivers one or two last lines of narration, and then there are a few silent seconds of him writhing in agony before it fades to the credits. I think this would be a very powerful way to end the film. One thing that would be important in this scene is to never show Anakin being rescued by the emperor, so we don't really know what happens to him, but we see that he thinks he was doing the right thing all along. His last lines of narration would be creepy and disturbing, showing he was truly crazy, but his final flashback makes us sympathyze with him.
I think it would be very dramatic if the fight between Obi-Wan and Anakin was there, with lots of narration over it, showing exactly what was going on in his head as he fought with Obi-Wan. During this fight, we would have numerous flashbacks, some to times with Padme, some of times with the emporer, and some with Obi-Wan, showing thier friendship. As we look at Anakin burning on the ground at the end of the fight, and him screaming in agony, we hear more narration from Anakin, and this leads in to one more, final flashback that defines the whole movie and his overall motive, making us ultimately sympathyze with him. Then we would see Obi-Wan, standing there as he delivers his last lines, and walks off. Anakin sits there burning, in agony, and delivers one or two last lines of narration, and then there are a few silent seconds of him writhing in agony before it fades to the credits. I think this would be a very powerful way to end the film. One thing that would be important in this scene is to never show Anakin being rescued by the emperor, so we don't really know what happens to him, but we see that he thinks he was doing the right thing all along. His last lines of narration would be creepy and disturbing, showing he was truly crazy, but his final flashback makes us sympathyze with him.