My critique: Its awesome!
I have always wanted something like this.
There are a few points where it might have been nice if the music cues, for lack of a better term, flowed a little better, as to not make it so obvious that a line of dialogue or a scene was cut.
However, in the long run,this isnt that big of a deal as they are only a second or so and the main point of this release is the lightsabers.