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Post #236684

Author
MagnoliaFan
Parent topic
.: Revenge of the Jedi 0.83 MS Edition :. (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
18-Aug-2006, 8:46 PM
lol

Yeah, you're right. I copied and pasted from earlier in the thread and just kind of touched it up. I hadn't really looked it over much. I wasn't even really paying attention to their grammar before. This should be a little better:

STAR
WARS

Episode III
Revenge of the Jedi

The rebellion is doomed. The
Galactic Empire is nearing
completion of a new armored
battle station, even more powerful
then the first dreaded DEATH
STAR.

While the scattered remnants
of the Alliance are regrouping,
Luke Skywalker has returned
to his home planet of Tatooine
to rescue his friend Han Solo
from the clutches of the vile
gangster Jabba the Hutt.

It is a perilous time for the
small band of rebels struggling
to restore peace and freedom
throughout the galaxy....