Post #236681

Author: Karyudo
Parent topic: .: Revenge of the Jedi 0.83 MS Edition :. (* unfinished project *)
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Date created: 18-Aug-2006, 8:36 PM

Originally posted by: MagnoliaFan

Luke Skywalker, has returned
to his home planet of Tatooine

FYI, you don't need that comma after 'Skywalker'. In fact, it's wrong to have it there. And, as I mentioned to Master Skywalker, I think SW crawls end with four dots, not three.