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Post #236636

Author
MagnoliaFan
Parent topic
.: Revenge of the Jedi 0.83 MS Edition :. (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
18-Aug-2006, 4:41 PM
My one suggestion would be scrap the crawl and do a new one. Jedi's was always weak.

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It is a period of civil war...

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It is a dark time for the rebellion...

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Luke Skywalker has returned home...

Bring back elements of an earlier crawl draft or something. "The rebellion is doomed." etc.