It is the strangest thing I've ever read.
It's just bizarre ... nonsense. It's clear that the film The Thief and the Cobbler became ten thousand times better by doing away with all the dialogue, because the dialogue is ......... nonsense. Repetitive nonsense. It all feels like a lot of inane shouting.
I'm surprised by how many little things from the Thief film are in here. Many of the little bits of business the Thief does are in the script ....
You'll be surprised by the original ending to the witch scene. I was.
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