Post #230136

Author: InfoDroid
Parent topic: Episode I: PaulisDead2221's Edit (* unfinished project *)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/230136/action/topic#230136
Date created: 28-Jul-2006, 7:01 AM

I think your biggest problem with that shot is the jump in music. There's nothing to prepare the audience. One second they're walking quietly, the next the music is blasting and things are happening.

The problem is, there's no tension as they enter the room. Use music to raise the tension level. Maybe add a simple drumroll or something right before Qui-Gon activates his lightsaber to kind of segue more smoothly into the sudden action.

--InfoDroid