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The rules are the same: I write, you write, he writes, so on. But this time, you write a paragraph (minimum 5 sentences). This will make the story more deep and complex.

However, there are two new rules I'd like to set:
1. No double posting ( to give people a chance)
2. No personal attacks (this means you, Chaltab)

Now, with the story:

Once upon a time, there was man from Pluto. He had an Asian girlfriend though she had no time to spend with him at all. This man was strong enough he could turn bricks into ashes. One day, a elemental being came to him. He said "Would you like to travel to a planet full of adventure?"
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The simple story-telling thread is going just fine, so I don't think we really need this thread, and I also don't think you needed to single out Chaltab in your rules, especially as he didn't really do or say anything offensive in the other thread.

War does not make one great.

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What I meant by that was, he knew I didn't like the 2005 Narnia movie, and he threw it in there just to bust my chops. So yes, he committed a personal attack.
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Yeah, if a friendly elbow to the side is considered a personal attack, I certainly did attack you. [eyeroll smiley goes here]

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Do you think you might be a little over-sensitive Ingo? You picking on Chaltab in the first post of this thread was more of a 'personal attack' than what he 'did' to you.

War does not make one great.