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Post #227628

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Taolar
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Superman by Taolar (Formally: Son of Jorel) WORKPRINT AVAILABLE
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Date created
20-Jul-2006, 12:32 PM
Originally posted by: tweaker
I guess maybe my only thing is that little tiny scene where we see Clark from behind, from the middle of the back up, where we see his arms moving very slowly. If that scene were oversped a bit, it might help preserve the sensation of speed. As it is now, it kinda cuts into the pace...Clark running fast--hits the breaks, Clark pumping his arms slowly--then Clark running fast again. The shot just feels odd.

I completely agree. That shot sticks out like a rusty nail. And don't worry as I continue to polish this sucker I'm sure I'll try to hammer it back in several times.

But other than that, methinks I need to shut my hole.


Nah! I'm glad you spoke up. I like hearing opposing viewponts.

-T