That trailer was...
First i want to say how much more excited i am now about this than i was before. The new additions look EXCELLENT. Mace with a blue lightsaber, the footage from dune, the recoloring of scenes. Damn nice.
Now on to the part that made me say whoa...
The voice:
................. OMG IT'S LIKE I'VE DREAMED. Is it a little sloppy like you said? yes

Ok, onto the sharp-eyed fanboy criticism.
The voice being too low? it does seem to clash with this girly-looking jedi lucas created.... (particularly the first lines "anakin at your service") but the more I listen, the more I like it. When it's all mixed together with the final sound track it should blend in nicely and not be too noticably dubbed. (Wow, you've got some cajones to attempt this. I commend you.)
Was C3P0 given new dialogue? I just noticed. Oh that's so cool....
There's still a bit of purple glow around mace's hand. Not that big a deal but it's there. *shrugs* overall a fine looking saber.
I'm not sure if you've already mentioned it but quickly i'll ask, was the "don't you touch me, AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH" a temp place-holder for something else? It's uh, it's a little cheesy. heh.
I think some of the re-colored scenes look a little too saturated with that color. the balcony one and the tatooine one seem somewhat overdone.
Your work here is spectacular overall. I'm so jealous, I want to do voices too...

i've uploaded it to youtube for all to see. this is great. (oh er, don't check out my vids.... they're too embarassing...)
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