1. Maybe you should raise the pitch of Anakin's new voice a little bit, but only A LITTLE BIT! In Episode II Anakin is a thin person, physically. Such a deep voice doesn't seem to fit, but I like it at all, especially considering Anakin's later voice: James Earl Jones. So, only A LITTLE BIT!
2. I love what the kiss scene has become. It looks like it happen's in the moon light. Very romantic!!!!!!!!
All in all, if you adapt Anakin's voice A LITTLE BIT, I have no doubt that SOTDS will create the feeling and atmosphere of the Original Trilogy! Wonderful!!!!