- Cut out Panaka's entire "sitting ducks" line. It adds nothing to the story, it sounds lame, and by keeping him in, you're introducing too many characters at once. Good thing it's relatively easy to do.
- Cut out or reposition the ambassador ship sequence at the beginning - it's too close to the Queen's starship, and it may confuse the audience.
- I'm glad you cut out R2 introduction and clean-up order, as it's way over the top, and drags the film down.
- Please remove Jar Jar's "weesa going home!"
Keep it up, this is by far the most interesting Episode I project.