Seriously though, I'm leaving for China for three weeks this coming wendsday, so I'll be out of commission again for awhile, but they have computers there so I'm pretty sure i'll be able to come back here every now and then, so keep posting.
Here's a sample of what my new opening looks like right now, I just wanted to show this before I start committing to any reconfabulating of the beginning. Just pretend like the title crawl before is perfect and explains everything.