I agree, the heated emotions should include some anger-- it's not just foreshadowing, but it makes sense for such young people to get hurt and mad.
I love the direction of your new line, but I wonder about the phrase-- "reeled me in" is decidely earth-bound, refering to a fishing pole with a fishing reel.
Would this work as well, without the metaphor? -- "Yes! You pulled me in knowing you would only make a mockery of me. And my life."
Just a thought--
Digging your great work as always!
Mark