I just reread your letter Bossk. Its till top drawer.
However something did occur to me.
A friend of mine emailed Roger Ebert when we were writing our thesis papers this time last year. I forget the exact response, but I know it contained references to him being very busy.
My only suggestion for future letters are to keep them brief. This indeed sucks because I don't know what of your letter should be cut. All I can think is a shorter letter might be more likely to be read. thats all.
Again I like the letter as is, I'm jsut trying to think strategically.