I do think that the main title should be changed from the red writing, so that it just reads "special abridged edition" in white. I also think that the end credits would benefit from having the cast members that weren't in your cut simply edited out instead of the "missing" stamp. I feel that the red just stands out too much from the look and tone of the film.
Also the skipping on the Divx version is really noticable. I was aware of it throughout the entire film, and the missing frames make some of the CGI look like stop-frame animation. I hope your DVD version of the film doesn't suffer from this, it would be a shame for a good edit like this.