For that scene, you really did a great job of re-editing it since it was so warped in the Calvert cut, so that's the only nitpicky thing I found.
Also, have you considered using Rimsky-Korsakov's Russian Easter Overture during the war machine sequence with the thief? I synched the last 6 minutes or so with it and it fit perfectly. If you need the mp3, I'll upload it.