Although, I finally noticed a few things...
When the Thief starts gliding, you can see him look back at the wings with a wonderful look of joy. I also saw how the hands seemed to open and close on the background.
I did notice the rough cut lacked the cross-cutting between the witch falling and the thief falling... is this going back?
If anything needs to be taken out, the bit with Zig-Zag with the alligators feels like it should have been placed somewhere else because it doesn't make sense why the film would cut just for that small bit. It feels a lot like it should have gone where the dissolve from sunset to sunrise was.