Sure, no problem...and no hard feelings either....I really like the cover (as well as some of your other work)...so by any means, don't let this deter you.

I have put my suggested corrections in BOLD :

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Remember back in 1997, when you couldn't watch TV without seeing a promotion for the Special Edition of the Star Wars Trilogy? A time when no matter what station you tuned into, a sneak peak of the revamped films was coming up next?

Now, journey back to those wonderful days with STAR WARS: SPECIAL EDITION HYPE; the third installment from Orange Cow Productions. All of your favorite commercials and specials are now available on one DVD!

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I changed some of the wording around to give it, in my opinion, clearer grammar that overall works a little bit better, at least here in the states. I know you are from the UK, Ell...so I'll just chalk this all up to "cultural differences"