That is:
To make it further look like Neo is being brought home from Machine City (there is no exterior shot long enough to use (or re-use)).
Additional of a voice-over or footage to explain that Neo is jacking in looking for the Oracle (too rushed of a pace or suffers from voice-over-overload).
There is still some hope for the audio clip of Keanu saying 'It's over' but I'm not getting my hopes up.
I have managed to clean up a few audio edits, removed the opening voice over, and extend Neo's jack-in before the Super Brawl to improve the pace and logic of events.
It's better, but still not completely what I want. I'm waiting for the DVD of the Watcher for the audio clip so if no further ideas present before than you'll just have to fill in a few blanks on your own when watching. The pace should still be entertaining.
Btw, I haven't trimmed the rave at the end... yet(?). Out of context it didn't feel too long, but I'll decide after I rewatch the film in it's entirety.