Wow, nice details, then. I did find it annoying that you had to go to storyboards in a few places that should have been left alone. The shot of Yum-Yum arranging flowers into a heart is really important because it complements Tack's work with the shoe. Same thing for the shot of her breaking all her shoes right after Tack is making a cat's cradle image of her. (although, the rest of that Yum-Yum scene kind of doesn't fit in since it doesn't really have a payoff unless something is missing.. I kind of think it would have been better with just a fade-in on Yum-Yum breaking up the shoes and going to sleep). I just hate how a lot of the real subtle stuff just went over their heads. It seems like nearly everything in the film has a "balance" in terms of having a payoff.

By the way, I listened closely to the music you can finally hear under Zig-Zag's "milk and honeyed land" speech. It sounds like church organ music... I guess it's making fun of Zig-Zag's "sermon"

Oh, I stitched this together:

http://ctufilms.googlepages.com/goldencitypanorama-sm.jpg

Here's the very, very large version: http://ctufilms.googlepages.com/goldencitypanorama-lg.jpg

One question... I want to include a note with all the DVD-R's I'm giving away with who to contact at Disney. Do you have any sort of address or phone number I should include?