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That's really neat that Nasruddin has a cameo, after all. I'll admit that I was looking through crowd scenes to see if there were any other in-jokes. Maybe someone put Richard Williams in a turban or something.
"I was a perfect idiot to listen to you!"
"Listen here, there ain't nothing in this world that's perfect!"

- from The Bank Dick
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Look at Dick and The Thief side by side sometime ....


The guy on the left of the first crowd shot rather reminds me of Omar Shah, but I'm sure that's just me being crazy.


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http://orangecow.org/thief/nasruddindrawing2.jpg

http://orangecow.org/thief/meemeebubbanasruddin.jpg

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"General Taboo."

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"Anwar, the evil Grand Vizier of Persia, and his vulture Brutay."

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"Chief Boozdil and the brigands."

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The ending.

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From 1972 ...

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From the final film.
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I'm still amazed how he kept stuff nearly exactly the same over such a long time. You're right about The Thief looking like Williams... I think I saw one sketch among your scans that did have him drawn as a characture.

By the way, in order for my film professor to get an idea of what The Thief and the Cobbler is before reading my term paper, I let him borrow my 3rd gen workprint DVD-R, the recobbled rough cut, and Arabian Knight. I can't wait to get his reaction from the recobbled cut and then Arabian Knight. How much do you want to bet he'll turn off the last one within 10 minutes? I'm word-of-mouthing the hell out of this film...

My paper is going to be pretty awesome, I think. I'm drawing parallels to the main silent comedians, as well as relating to modes of production and other silent films. I even got permission to include images as reference figures, so I can put photos of Harry Langdon and Tack side-by-side. I gave a rough draft to him, so I'm waiting for input on what I should/shouldn't do for the final paper. I also want to include a short part comparing the mangling to The Magnificent Ambersons and Greed.

Best of all, I'll be citing your interviews with Alex Williams and Roy Naisbitt. I'll be sure to post a link to it here. It'll be a great reference on the silent influences... I really think it'll enhance the appreciation of the film. I know spotting all the silent comedy homages made it more fun for me.

One thing that bothers me is that the workprint apparently got a bad reaction from people... well, it's weird how it's so loved now. It seems to get a lukewarm reaction to a lot of animation people (not a lot of reaction to the threads on the animation message boards), yet the people that aren't really specifically animation fans love it. Maybe I'm overgeneralizing...
"I was a perfect idiot to listen to you!"
"Listen here, there ain't nothing in this world that's perfect!"

- from The Bank Dick
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Here is Clapperboard, part 1!

http://rapidshare.de/files/18285366/Clapperboard_1.mov.html

1972 - Dick Williams shows us the making of the Nasrudin film. We watch Dick, Ken Harris and Roy Naisbitt work ...

The sound on this was terrible - I've done my best to make it easier to understand ... even if it now sounds kind of electronic.
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Originally posted by: ocpmovie
Here is Clapperboard, part 1!

http://rapidshare.de/files/18285366/Clapperboard_1.mov.html

1972 - Dick Williams shows us the making of the Nasrudin film. We watch Dick, Ken Harris and Roy Naisbitt work ...

The sound on this was terrible - I've done my best to make it easier to understand ... even if it now sounds kind of electronic.

That's OK with me! While noticing Granada produced the Clapperboard films, the other one, "A Creative Man" looks to have been shown on the old "NET" (National Educational Television). This was the predessesor to what we know today as PBS.
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Oh, I did some reading on how to interpret editor's marks...

The "V" editor marks are fade-to/from-black (V = fade to black, inverted V = fade from black), while the diagonal lines are for dissolves.

So, the wide shot of the castle gate after Tack is captured should have a fade from black instead of a hard cut. The shot of the gate after the fade-to-black on Zig-Zag's face (after "go with princess yum-yum") should also be a fade from black. There should be dissolves between the slow-motion wounded soldier, the blood spurts, and then King Nod. The shot of Tack forming Yum-Yum's face in the string should have a fade from black instead of a hard cut.

Just a few examples.

Also, I know it's a compromise due to what's available, but would it be possible to fill in the dissolves during the flyover with the pencils-only footage? The dissolves to the One-Eyes really harm the impact of the march and battle later. It's just as important as cutting to storyboards to hide Tack's voice in some parts.

I'll be sending you a ton of music, but here's a piece you might find suitable to use as a theme for the thief:

http://ctufilms.googlepages.com/04AllegroPesante.mp3 (from Vaughan Williams' 9th symphony)

You might want to do a remix to just get the really good parts.
"I was a perfect idiot to listen to you!"
"Listen here, there ain't nothing in this world that's perfect!"

- from The Bank Dick
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>>The "V" editor marks are fade-to/from-black (V = fade to black, inverted V = fade from black), while the diagonal lines are for dissolves.

I know what those editor's marks mean ... =) I've had to cut film myself at times.

I've chosen to ignore them - I rather prefer having hard cuts, when the material available is limited. I probably should follow them, but I do my own thing.

EDIT: Bowing to peer pressure ... =) I've added a fade into "Open for the Royal Polo Ponies."


>> Also, I know it's a compromise due to what's available, but would it be possible to fill in the dissolves during the flyover with the pencils-only footage?

Nope.

<< The dissolves to the One-Eyes really harm the impact of the march and battle later.

Yep.




I'm working on the final cut. The processing that's being done to the workprint material is causing it to render at excruciatingly slow speed this time round. This is gonna take a while.
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Originally posted by: OgOggilby
Oh, I did some reading on how to interpret editor's marks...

The "V" editor marks are fade-to/from-black (V = fade to black, inverted V = fade from black), while the diagonal lines are for dissolves.
That's true. I read all about this in "The Filmmaker's Handbook" years ago.

So, the wide shot of the castle gate after Tack is captured should have a fade from black instead of a hard cut. The shot of the gate after the fade-to-black on Zig-Zag's face (after "go with princess yum-yum") should also be a fade from black. There should be dissolves between the slow-motion wounded soldier, the blood spurts, and then King Nod. The shot of Tack forming Yum-Yum's face in the string should have a fade from black instead of a hard cut.

Just a few examples.

Also, I know it's a compromise due to what's available, but would it be possible to fill in the dissolves during the flyover with the pencils-only footage? The dissolves to the One-Eyes really harm the impact of the march and battle later. It's just as important as cutting to storyboards to hide Tack's voice in some parts.

That would be neat to see the use of fades and dissolves in parts that were indicated in the workprint.

I'll be sending you a ton of music, but here's a piece you might find suitable to use as a theme for the thief:

http://ctufilms.googlepages.com/04AllegroPesante.mp3 (from Vaughan Williams' 9th symphony)

You might want to do a remix to just get the really good parts.

Listening to it right now. I can see where this might come in handy!
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Originally posted by: ocpmovie
>>The "V" editor marks are fade-to/from-black (V = fade to black, inverted V = fade from black), while the diagonal lines are for dissolves.

I know what those editor's marks mean ... =) I've had to cut film myself at times.

I've chosen to ignore them - I rather prefer having hard cuts, when the material available is limited. I probably should follow them, but I do my own thing.

EDIT: Bowing to peer pressure ... =) I've added a fade into "Open for the Royal Polo Ponies."
That's the only point where I felt a fade was sufficient. The rest is OK as you have it.

>> Also, I know it's a compromise due to what's available, but would it be possible to fill in the dissolves during the flyover with the pencils-only footage?

Nope.

<< The dissolves to the One-Eyes really harm the impact of the march and battle later.

Yep.




I'm working on the final cut. The processing that's being done to the workprint material is causing it to render at excruciatingly slow speed this time round. This is gonna take a while.

Take your time! We're rooting for you!
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Wait, so you have you gotten the restored workprint back? Screenshots please!
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Chris didn't send a restored workprint ... so I've decided to just go ahead with the workprint I've got, sharpening it up myself. I can't wait forever ... =)

I haven't written him back yet ... but he did some nice work on Raggedy Ann.
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Yeah... it does seem like there's not enough footage where the editor marks are. Even with the crappy spoilers in the flyover, the use of the DVD version is really the only choice to make. It's just a pity they had to be added in the first place. Since the first re-cut had most of the march intact, it doesn't make sense to use the footage twice (although, they did the same thing with the zoom-in right after "TAKE ME TO YOUR MASTER!" with Mighty One-Eye). At least the flyover would exist in unbroken form in the form of its original negative since what appears in the film is duplicate negative thanks to the dissolves.

By the way, I went through the workprint to calculate how much usable finished footage is in the film. It's roughly 60 minutes of fully completed animation (I subtracted shots with full animation but are only tests like the bad line-up shot during the thief's flight or the 360 degree turnaround on the wire). However, if a restoration happened, there's really no reason to not use the finished shot of the thief coming into Yum-Yum's bathroom, the end title, the flyover (granted it's uncut on its negative) or some other shots (like Zig-Zag tripping over Tack and Tack's close-up early in the film) since they're in ones and feature no continuity/drafting flaws. Combined with the springs scene and the extra footage of the Thief trying to steal the jewel in the glass, I'd estimate that at least 70 minutes of finished material can be used. There's probably 10 minutes of stuff that never made it past the storyboards or pencil tests, then another 10 minutes of stuff animated from the storyboards or pencil animation that's unusuable due to continuity errors (Zig-Zag's eyes) or just being crappy animation (TAAAAAAACK!) No idea why Disney keeps hesitating since they basically just need Williams to do about 20-25 minutes of work.
"I was a perfect idiot to listen to you!"
"Listen here, there ain't nothing in this world that's perfect!"

- from The Bank Dick
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The opening with the hands poses the same problem as the flyover. They screwed it up with dissolves, so I have to do a very different edit. I wish I could recreate the original, as it's quite logical.


I'm not fond of The Thief coming into Yumyum's bathroom because she should have soap on her back and there should be a mirror there ... but oh well.


I've heard from many sources that all the good material in the Calvert version, the stuff that looks like Dick's work, like the ending shot, was done by a team of real Thief animators in London, who were fired pretty quickly. Many of the key Thief animators were among them, still trying to bang out quality material for Calvert. Dick was not involved at this point of course.


Editing.


What a difference this better quality workprint makes. I can finally do "match dissolves" from the DVD to the workprint and have it look good .... I did this in my Return of the Jedi edit to good effect, and I'm doing it here.

It reminds me how much material I actually cut out because it was low quality pencil tests that you couldn't see. Much of that material is being reinstated. Although, again because of a dissolve, I'm still doing something else with Tack's introduction. I've prepared a version of the first Tack shot which puts the pencil test material on a background. It has a more magical feel to it. I'm currently using it as the second Tack shot.


I've started from scratch but I should be able to bang out part 1 in good time as that's the easier of the two. I'm amazed how good the new workprint looks, particularly the pencil tests.

I can see that in the bath scene, Yumyum and Meemee are drawn more like the early "Persian Miniature" designs ... kind of halfway to where Yumyum is in the final film. A pencil shot I originally cut out of Yumyum handing her shoe to Tack shows a roughed-in Tack, and less good Yumyum animation.




I'm going to do some new effects (and opening titles) for this cut ... I still don't know what to do with the introduction of Yumyum. It's clear that SOMETHING needs to be there, but what's in the workprint is just a concept, and is very poor. If it was finished animation it would be great. I think I need to create something here myself which approximates the storyboards.


EDIT: It would be nice to do this for the Hands of Fate as well, but that would require actual animation. Oh well.


Besides the material not being there on the DVD, another reason why I'm kind of ignoring the workprint's notes to fade in and out is because I'm aware that this cut needs to be faster and punchier than the workprint. A workprint by nature is a work in progress and has a pretty slow pace. Out of desire to do this version justice, and since I'm not Richard Williams, I'm not really cutting anything out, even though a few things probably should be ... anything I cut out would be very minor. But to give the appearance that this is a faster, more finished, more entertaining cut, I have to add music, sound effects, things that make it feel faster ... and cut out, say, the black screen between scenes which fade in and out. And the actual fade ins and outs if they don't feel necessary.

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Having finally watched the rough cut, I have to say that while it's good, it does have a lot of pacing issues. There are a lot of cutbacks, where a long piece of action is happening, cuts to a reaction shot of somebody, and then back to the action. It just seems to totally screw the pacing up. I hope you keep that in mind...
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You're talking about the Recobbled Rough Cut here?


My hands are slightly tied here as far as cutting things. I'm trying to remain pretty true to the workprint, since I'm not Richard Wiliams and not allowed to make these decisions ...

Still ... gimme some "forinstance"s.
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Yeah, the first two shots of Tack don't really have to be in some order since he goes back to sleep both times. I actually like the "thumb hit" take as the first shot of him (apparently Fred Calvert did, too).

"I was a perfect idiot to listen to you!"
"Listen here, there ain't nothing in this world that's perfect!"

- from The Bank Dick
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Originally posted by: ocpmovie
You're talking about the Recobbled Rough Cut here?


My hands are slightly tied here as far as cutting things. I'm trying to remain pretty true to the workprint, since I'm not Richard Wiliams and not allowed to make these decisions ...

Still ... gimme some "forinstance"s.


Off the top of my head, I think there's a shot in the polo match where they cut back to the King for a couple seconds, and it just killed the humor of the Thief getting his ass kicked. Like you yourself noted, the workprint is a rough cut. Although I fully understand how delicate this whole operation is. One false move, and Williams gets really, realy sad.
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It is slightly a shame to switch them, since the Thief finds him in the same position he's in at the end of shot 2 .... which works the way I did it in my Rough Cut, cutting shot 2 up into two bits. But ah well.



The Thief is stealing a sleeping Yumyum's shoes ...
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Originally posted by: OgOggilby
Yeah, the first two shots of Tack don't really have to be in some order since he goes back to sleep both times. I actually like the "thumb hit" take as the first shot of him (apparently Fred Calvert did, too).

The thumb hit was a perfect way to set up his first few seconds on the screen, and I also that big of him threading the needle in his sleep (is that what he does?) if that can be set up to come in second when the Thief shows up.
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The package should have had the 2nd workprint in it. Not much can be done to it, but it still looks better than before. Too bad I couldn't get rid of the blended frames. Sometimes it's easy, sometimes it REALLY hard and then...you just can't. Expect another Rag DVD this week, the one I sent has the wrong aspect ratio.

I picked up Richard Williams' "The Animator's Survival Kit" yesterday. It has a 3 or 4 page sequence of the witch running. Pretty damn cool.
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Hey Chris! Can you send your restored workprint then, and quick? Maybe I can still use it for part 2 of the film.

I'll go ahead and write you.



Note that the Animator's Survival Kit version of The Witch running is redrawn with a different design - to avoid copyright troubles! Preston Blair did the same thing with Mickey Mouse in his animation books, turned him into an elf or something.
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Ok, looks like we're doing a proposal presentation that involves the audience taking action to get Disney to release The Thief and the Cobbler. The great thing is that I'll be giving out copies of the Recobbled Cut to everyone on Wednesday.

The problem is that I need a way to encode these onto DVD? What do you use? I have Sonic MyDVD and Pinnacle Studio 9, but they want $$$ before I can use the features. I'm just going to go ahead and download something, but I want some suggestions.

Now, the Recobbled Cut is going to just be a dupe of the rough cut you sent me. I need to send someone two other films (he helped me get the 3rd gen workprint right before you started on this), as well as get the disc ready for your stuff (the clips, the silent shorts, etc).
"I was a perfect idiot to listen to you!"
"Listen here, there ain't nothing in this world that's perfect!"

- from The Bank Dick