Originally posted by: OgOggilbyOh, I did some reading on how to interpret editor's marks...
The "V" editor marks are fade-to/from-black (V = fade to black, inverted V = fade from black), while the diagonal lines are for dissolves.
That's true. I read all about this in "The Filmmaker's Handbook" years ago.
So, the wide shot of the castle gate after Tack is captured should have a fade from black instead of a hard cut. The shot of the gate after the fade-to-black on Zig-Zag's face (after "go with princess yum-yum") should also be a fade from black. There should be dissolves between the slow-motion wounded soldier, the blood spurts, and then King Nod. The shot of Tack forming Yum-Yum's face in the string should have a fade from black instead of a hard cut.
Just a few examples.
Also, I know it's a compromise due to what's available, but would it be possible to fill in the dissolves during the flyover with the pencils-only footage? The dissolves to the One-Eyes really harm the impact of the march and battle later. It's just as important as cutting to storyboards to hide Tack's voice in some parts.
That would be neat to see the use of fades and dissolves in parts that were indicated in the workprint.
I'll be sending you a ton of music, but here's a piece you might find suitable to use as a theme for the thief:
http://ctufilms.googlepages.com/04AllegroPesante.mp3 (from Vaughan Williams' 9th symphony)
You might want to do a remix to just get the really good parts.