Now what do I want? To encourage you, to motivate you and to definetly try to keep you continuing to make fanedits, because you got visions and ideas and best of all you are daring compared to most other fan editors except for greencapt who may be the most daring of all (until I have seen his second edit). Your oracle scene (although not done sufficiently IMHO) is way cool from the idea to the making. You really tried to make this a different feel to what used to be such a unfulfilling sequel. Of course it won't be my influence to cause an effect a lot of effect on you fanediting future, but since no one has commented yet, I finally wanted to start, even though I cannot say I liked you edit. Why? Because it did not feel like a complete movie to me, the main reason for that is the audio. The audio problems start in the beginning and continue throughout th emovie. It's cool you kept the 5.1, but the soudntrakcs between cuts don't mix up to well, there are silences that cought my unwilling attention, music changes and different sounds of intonation (especially in the oracle scene, where it is still obvius that Smith and the oracle don't talk to one another). The result for me was sequences but not a movie feeling and towards the end the climax was missing because the oracle scene failed to be one for me. What I loved was your version of the "Trinity enters the facility" scene, which was very well edited (except for Link receiving the phonecall). But right now I am running ou of time. If you wish I will continue my report,if not... well, your choice. Keep up the good work, Dr.M.
Now what do I want? To encourage you, to motivate you and to definetly try to keep you continuing to make fanedits, because you got visions and ideas and best of all you are daring compared to most other fan editors except for greencapt who may be the most daring of all (until I have seen his second edit). Your oracle scene (although not done sufficiently IMHO) is way cool from the idea to the making. You really tried to make this a different feel to what used to be such a unfulfilling sequel. Of course it won't be my influence to cause an effect a lot of effect on you fanediting future, but since no one has commented yet, I finally wanted to start, even though I cannot say I liked you edit. Why? Because it did not feel like a complete movie to me, the main reason for that is the audio. The audio problems start in the beginning and continue throughout th emovie. It's cool you kept the 5.1, but the soudntrakcs between cuts don't mix up to well, there are silences that cought my unwilling attention, music changes and different sounds of intonation (especially in the oracle scene, where it is still obvius that Smith and the oracle don't talk to one another). The result for me was sequences but not a movie feeling and towards the end the climax was missing because the oracle scene failed to be one for me. What I loved was your version of the "Trinity enters the facility" scene, which was very well edited (except for Link receiving the phonecall). But right now I am running ou of time. If you wish I will continue my report,if not... well, your choice. Keep up the good work, Dr.M.