In film making it is usually important to start with an establishing shot before the one person cut aways, so we can see who's on the scene before any action or dioulge takes place.
I.E. seeing the oracle by herself in the kitchen helps the viewer understand whats going on. It would really help it seem less like a fan edit.
But, I'll let you try it your way, if you think it flows better go for it, your the boss. One sugjestion, is if your editing software allows you to do some color correction, try to darken the scenes with gloria foster, and if it's advanced, try to match the green lighting in the kitchen from M1 to M3.
Just my two cents, keep up the hard work. I can't wait to see the end product.