Technically, I thought maybe the lightening/whitening was a bit overdone in some places, and for some reason the screen looked fuzzy about 1/3 of the way from the top, but within two minutes I didn't notice that anymore.
I just watched and enjoyed. It was great--I totally forgot I was supposed to be "evaluating," which I would take as a sign that you (and, of course, Moth3r) did a great job.
Nice work!