Much smoother. You can see a little blurring if you look closely, but that's much less distracting than the jerkiness of the previous file.

Regarding the wipe - and this is just a suggestion - I think it may look better going the other way, i.e. a closing iris rather than opening. The reason is because the fighters are seen moving away from the camera (getting smaller), and wipes in other parts of the trilogy generally follow the direction of movement on screen. Do you know what I mean or have I not explained it very well?