However, three quibbles:
1) Any time a scene has been re-encoded to cut out any SE stuff, the framerate really suffers, and it becomes jerky and quite annoying (also true of SW:CE, but not very noticeable there).
2) The opening crawl - you're not supposed to see the stars inside the STAR WARS lettering, it's supposed to be solid black, but not on this DVD (I didn't notice it in SW:CE at all).
3) I personally feel the lightsaber re-rotoscoping could have been done better.
Other than that, great job - I especially liked your editing of McDiarmid's voice in place of Rivell's on the alternate audio track.
Downloading Jedi as I type!