Originally posted by: theredbaron
There were a few grammar problems here and there, so proof-read it and make the relevant changes before you send it (it will make the letter more legitimate if you have immaculate spelling and grammar), but as far as what you've said in the letter, it's perfect.

It's a good letter. I too hope that you proof read your letter before you sent it, because if all your T's aren't crossed and your I's aren't dotted, they will probably cast it aside. It looks poor if you have bad grammar.