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Post #176825

Author
twister111
Parent topic
Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side (the TM edit) (Released)
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Date created
3-Feb-2006, 6:24 AM
Trooperman: I like the new chase scene. I especially like that it's more like a dark sky now and, less los vegasy. I was also remembering the Kamino location mystery and, it's become less clear in this version because, of the loss of the rishi maze info. I was thinking about a change of lines to the droid analysis scene to make it more clear.

"One moment please"
Machine checks on dart
"Item seems to have come from a recent trade. From the Kamino system just outside the rishi maze. Exact planet cordinates are unknown. No other information is availible."

-Or-

"It is a toxic kyberdart. Last known to be in production in the Kamino system along the outlying rishi maze. Exact planet cordinates are unknown. No other information is availible."

This could imply that Jango just bought it at a weapons store/he was there recently and, you could keep the "according to my information it should appear here. Just outside the rishi maze." bit in the library. It also, explains why he thinks it's there. If you take it out it's as though Kamino is where this dart came from, Kamino not found in archives, random place picked that has anonmilies to go to [and, wouldn't you know it, it's there!] . It also, keeps the clone information secret until he get's to Kamino. Oh, yeah and, I changed the name to kyberdart becuase, according to here that's what it was originally going to be called.